My visual poem is about creature and basically how they behave. The visuals made an impact because, some of the clips were funny and beautiful. Some of my lines were very powerful like "Seeing the bright blinding colors of amazing birds." Most of the visuals of my poem weren't that powerful mostly because it didn't match the audio since I couldn't find B-roll at my house that matched.
Since I hadn't had that much time to finish my visual poem I didn't add that much effects. All I added was music which fitted very well with my message. I added one more effect which was the transformation tool but I only did it in one of the clips which was the end clip when multiple ainmal clips were shown at the same time. One thing I should have added is saturation because some the shots were kind of dull in color. One thing I should have done with the music was create my own sinc the mucis that's on my visual poem wasn't created by me.
Im not completely satisfied with my results for my finished product for many reasons. One if I added more efffects and applicable B-roll my visual poem would have been five times better. I should of worked quicker and harder to get a better final product for my poem. I am glad that I finished in time though, beacause I didn't finish in class and I had to do during lunch recess. That was the only thing I was actually "proud" of.
good visuals
ReplyDeleteneeds a better start
good lyrics
I love the music, it goes with your writing
ReplyDeleteNo sound effects, sound effects would have made this THE BOMB
Awesome shots of animals, like the bugs (ew)
I liked how four pictures were in one picture at a time
ReplyDelete........Red bird?
The music was impressive, I liked it as it matched the audio and b-roll
good audio
ReplyDeleteon one picture could of have the picture clear
good b-roll
good shots of the bird
ReplyDeletelower the music
good shots of animals
I really liked how you recited your poem with expression.
ReplyDeleteYou might have wanted to use an actual bird for the colorful one.
You had great visuals other than the fake one!
I like The B-roll that you included.
ReplyDeleteOne think that could be better is none.
I really like the B-roll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and the content of your visual poem.
I like how your b-roll applies with what your saying
ReplyDeleteneeds more effects to be added
great meaning
Compliment:The poem was deep
ReplyDeleteArea of Improvement:You should have done Animals
Compliments:The shot with the goat was awesome
Great imagery of animals and creatures
ReplyDeleteOne shot was blurry
I love it! So cute
I really like how you got the bugs crawling.
ReplyDeleteI think one thing that could be better is when you got the video of the spider it could be more clear.
I also like how the music matched your topic of your poem.
I like all the different kinds of b-roll.
ReplyDeleteYou could have used a real bird or chicken.
I like all the angles and shots of b-roll.
Good B-Roll I really liked how you got the footage of the ants.
ReplyDeleteThe spider B-Roll was blurry.
Really good poem it was beautiful. And you projected your voice.
The effect at the end was good.
ReplyDeleteTurn down the music a bit.
The b-roll shot of the goat was great.
I like the B-roll of the fake cardinal Cute!
ReplyDeleteI think that some B-roll was a little weird but thats just me.
I really like that goat I WANT THAT GOAT!! :D
You had some really good pictures of animals. In the video of the field you move the camera fast, it makes me dizzy. Your over all poem was really good!
ReplyDeleteI liked the B-roll of that bird, it was kinda funny haha.
ReplyDeleteI think the music could've been a little softer.
I like the shot of the goat!! That was adorable :3.
Great shot of the animals and insects. Could have got a shot of a chicken or a bird flying. Other then that the poem was great.
ReplyDeleteYou have amazing shots of animals, how did you find all of them to get shots of? You couldve gotten a shot of an actual bird... That goat is so kawaii ahh!
ReplyDeleteCompliment: I like the music and the audio that goes with your poem
ReplyDeleteCriticism:
Compliment: I liked your B-Roll and it was really creative.
love the shots
ReplyDeletegreat until you took a shot of the stuffed animal
great job
Has good b-roll of animals
ReplyDeleteSome of the shots are dark and blurry
audio and music fitted the poem
Compliment: I loved your visuals. They were clear and they were shots you had to find before you could start filming.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: Your audio could have been a little softer.
Compliment: I liked your poem. It was good.